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#41  2008-11-11 11:20:57

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

xXlynethXx wrote:

hehe.
gnda ng chap. haha!!
nxt naa.

..okie..i'll work on it

filpinadk wrote:

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

para namng "pinagpustahan" nila c Jenny 

mapasagot nga nmn kaya ni Dennis c Jenny

can't w88888 for the next updateeeeeeeee

haha. ewan! mahirap ata yun!..

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wala pa? hihihi.. sana update mo na...please?

masyado kang hot!..haha. .

#42  2008-11-11 13:00:55

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

“So, National Book Store?”

haha..toinkz!!

i lold to this! chaka!

iba tlga..

neweiz..

haha.. watz with AR-ar??:paranoid:

aahhhhhhhhh!!! melay..

gnda na..LOL haha


#43  2008-11-12 10:38:30

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:arrow:..okie..i'll work on it

hehe. tnx.
i'll w8. :D




                                you && i ;P

#44  2008-11-12 12:58:04

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xXlynethXx wrote:

hehe. tnx.
i'll w8.

gee..tnx! I'll try to update tomorrow..were so busy right now..:)

rikodlaya11 wrote:

haha.. watz with AR-ar??

he's lookin at his crush..-->Jenny.

juz givin you an idea that Jenny is in the cafe!

#45  2008-11-13 10:42:10

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

aw TS bitin:crybaby:

#46  2008-11-13 14:32:12

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:crybaby::crybaby::crybaby::crybaby:

update nah!


#47  2008-11-13 15:36:37

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

bt gnun?
pinagpustahan nla si jenny?!
hahaha.
update update!!
excited na ako!! hahaha. lol



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empire170 wrote:

aw TS bitin:crybaby:

huhu..ive been busy na..hmp! i'll try my best to update ..

rikodlaya11 wrote:

update nah!

haha. xoo busy ..haha.

theejhay wrote:

bt gnun?
pinagpustahan nla si jenny?!
hahaha.
update update!!
excited na ako!! hahaha. lol

..mga sira kasi sila eh! jokes!.. i'll try my best to update! ..

the story is getting predictable..but don't make conclusions cause it's not what you think it is!..haha. LOL. i'll try to update tomorrow..thanks anyways..

#49  2008-11-15 12:15:35

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

go go go go!!! you are really a good writer! to b honest this s d only love story that i liked (except in the movies):rose: i like kasi when they wer just lyk cat & mouse:eh: :wow:


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they say time is your greatest enemy! but i don't know f its true!!!

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go go go go!!! you are really a good writer! to b honest this s d only love story that i liked (except in the movies) i like kasi when they wer just lyk cat & mouse:eh:

well, gee thanks! Haha. Marami ding mga good writers dito...hmmm...try to read some.

Sorry if the update is super duper tagal...I'm typing the next chap right now. Kip reading! :D

#51  2008-11-15 16:51:47

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

la parin? hihi...


...missymisspopular is supahdupah busy!!! Hihihi...

sorry for being inactive...

#52  2008-11-15 17:03:31

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sorry ha...natagalan..here's CHAPTER 4 Part 1

“DEAL!”

Chapter 4 –Two days in one house

Hahai. Good mooorning Philippines! Huling morning ko na ‘to sa summer….bukas…back to school na! Haiztz! Kainis! Gusto ko pa sanang umabsent! LOL. Loko lang…syempre hindi no! Pagagalitan ako ni Maam Kion. Kelangan rin ako dun para magwelcome welcome. Ek-ek ever. Makipagplastikan! Haizzztz! Kaloka tong buhay ko…hmmmm…di ko parin makalimutan yung pagsipa ko sa ‘ano’ ni Dennis dun sa gimiktaym…hahahaha! Kakatawa nun. Oh well, I think kinalimutan na nya yun…one week na ang nakaraan no…din a ako binulabog! Weeee! Hahaha. Teka. Kalimutan muna natin ang unggoy na yan! Malas lang yan sa buhay ko no! Butit kapitbahay ko lang sya…di talaga ako mabubuhay no kung titira kami sa iisang bubong. Alam nyo na…baka mapano pa ako…diba malas sya? Diba?;];];]

Haizzz…life…ewan ko na talaga..haizz…gutom na ako…gusto ko na kumain.:D

Weee…parang iba ata ah…hmmm…

“Morning guys! Hi Tita!...wazzup with packing?”:cool:

“Hhha..haaaa?? Ahhh…ehhh…” What’s with the face of tita? Parang natatakot ah? Nakakaintriga kung ano ang sasabihin! Hmp! Oh well…

“Spill it out Tita!”:rolleyes:

“Ahhh…wanna eat Jenn? I let Ikay cook fish fillet! …But if you want additionals…just tell me…we’ll just order…” Hmmm…I smell something…not good!

“Tell me Tita! I know there’s something wrong! Nawala si Kianna? OMG! Huhu… O baka naman…namatay na si Dennis? Okay lang sakin yun…” Sana nga….. Duh! Possibilities guyz! Wag na kayong umangal.:D

“Tsk! Di yan…”

“Ehh…ano nga?”

“Hayy…okay okay!...Uhmmm…spray time natin ngayon…”

“Huh? Yun lang? Geez! Kala ko ano na! May nakita ka na namang cockroach? Haha. Okay…mag-pack-up narin ako!”:D

“Jenn…”

“What?”

“Haizzztz! Uhmmm…Jenn…we are having a medical mission at some public schools for two days. We are giving some medicines and etcetera before first day of class. And…I’m bringing with me Yaya Ikay and….             


Yaya Tipay…”

“Ahh…so? Haha. So, wala ako kasama sa apartment mo? Okay lang tita. Payag naman ako…”

“Jenn…I need Yaya Tipay…”

“Huh? So? Di ko yan problema…kay Dennis yan…Sige …I better-“

“Wait! It is your problem…”

“What do you mean?”









“Dennis…wont let…Yaya Tipay go…without …someone to be with…di siya papayag na isama si Yaya Tipay pag wala syang kasama…” WHAT?:o:o:o

“So you mean…”








“Yes…Jenn…No other choices!”

“Uhmmm…Tita…hehe…nagpapatawa naman kayo…di naman papayag si Dennis na ako ang kasama nya diba?”:ninja:







“Actually…sya ang nagsuggest!”

“TITA!”:mad:

“Jenn…I need Yaya Tipay…”

“Tita…lam nyo namang di ako mabubuhay kung-“

“Yes…I know…I know…Pero wala na tayong magawa…”

“Tita…Grrrr! I hate this! Gumising ka Jenny…this is just a bad dream!”:angry:

“No it’s not! Pack-up now Jenn…the sprayer will come in a minute!”

“Aiiiishhh! What else could I possibly do? Grrrrr!”:mad::mad::mad:




Kainis! Sabi ko namang di ako mabubuhay diba kung titira kami ni Dennis sa iisang bubong? Diba? Diba? Aish! Ano ka ba Dennis? Ano ba ang naisip mo? Arghhh!!!!
Grabe! Watta suggestion! Hmmm…baka…he’s in drugs or something? Oo nga…:paranoid:



So ayun…nagpack-up na ako…kinuha ko na lahat ng gamit ko...pati pangschool at lahat lahat! (Everytime talaga na may makitang ipis si Tita sa bahay...tawag agad sya sa mga sprayer ek ek. Arte talaga. Haha.) Kelangan ko na dalhin lahat no! Alangan naman papasok ako pag may naiwan? Hahai.

Kumain narin ako ng pagkadali dali dahil hayan na ang mga sprayers. Mag-uumpisa na yan sila maya-maya. Hmp! Kainis! Di pa ako handang makibahay sa unggoy na yun! Hayyyy…buhay.,,

“Jenn…are you ready?”

“I guess NOT!”:doubt:

“O cmon! Di ka naman aanuhin ni Dennis eh! Sa guest room ka rin naman matutulog…walang problema. Don’t worry too! Marunong din yung magluto!”:o

“Ha? Funny tita…”

“You think pabayaan lang kitang makasama sya kung di sya marunong magluto? Eh anong kakainin nyo?” May point ka jan Tita! Haha. Infairness…magaling palang magluto ang unggoy? Oh well…sana di ako magkastomachache!LOL:lol::lol::lol:

“Hey…were here! Ingatz ka Jenn ha? You’ll do good. Anyways…pinasukan ko na yang ATM mo…para…baon mo and for some extra extra! Kei…bye! Happy stay!”

“Right…” As if I’ll be happy…:doubt:




Haizz! This is it!





Ok…yun…pumasok na ako without even knocking. Pake ko ba? Di naman ako magnanakaw diba? Haha.

Haizz…bigat ng bag! Sana…may tutulong…aish…erase erase! I don’t need his help! Kaya ko naman to ah! Kaya ko to!

“Hi Jenn…nandito ka na pala…di ka man lang kumatok…sana natulungan na kita kanina pa…” Are you on drugs? Duh! He’s acting like maamong tupa! Di bagay…

Nilagpasan ko lang sya na parang walang narinig o nakita. Mahirap ng patulan to…baka naka-drugs nga.

“Hey wait…” kinukuha nya bags ko! Errr! Nakadrugs nga!

“Don’t touch me drug addict! Wag mo kong galawin…kundi…kundi…ahhhh!!!”
tumakbo na ako papuntang guest room. Argghh! Ambigat! Hmp! Kaya ko to! :penguin::penguin::penguin:



DENNIS’ POV

“Tinawag ba akong drug addict? Tsk.”:angry:




Back to JENNY

Hayyy..kakapagod…huhuhuhu…sakit ng kamay ko…ouch..huhuhu…:crybaby::crybaby:

Hayy…makatulog na nga…zZzZzzZzzZzzzzzZzZzzZzz

DENNIS

12:30 PM

Wrong timing! May lakad ako! Aishhh!

Okay naman siguro jan si Jenny diba? May food naman para lunch…hmmm…bat nag-aalala ka jan Denn?

Shut up! Parte na yan sa plano ko okay? ;]

Hmp! Sayang…maya nalang…I know…maybe…someday…we’ll be good friends! Jan naman nagsisimula yang lahat diba?

Okay…I’ll be back in 5:00 PM Jenn.

So well…punta na ako National Bookstore para…mamili ng construction materials. Kelangan na naming yun eh para sa school. Mabait din naman ako…wenks! Bakla ka Dennis!

Hmmm…oo nga pala! Bukas na ang klase! Syempre…makipagsiksikan ako sa mga peeps ditto! Hmmm…bahala na…There’s no time to loose!

Hmmm…so…ano uunahin ko? Hmmm…

“Dennis!!!!!”:doubt:

Hai…kasabay ko pang mamili ang mga barkada ko…Ang ingay! Kahiya to! Nangingibabaw ang boses ni Clint!

“Oh…mamimili rin kayo ng construction materials?”

“Oo naman! Syempre! Junior na eh! So…musta plano mo kay Jenn? “ Mas gusto ata nyang manalo ako sa pustahan…:cool:

“Wala na kayo paki dun! Diskarte ko ang diskarte ko!”:P

“Eto naman! Share mo naman! “ Kulit mo Clint! Teka…

“San si Ar-ar?”:)

“ Tsk. Change topic! Nakabili nayun no! Yun pa! Eh parang boy scout yun! I wonder nga kung bakit section Archimedes parin yun! Oh well…” May sectioning na pala? Aish…nakalimutan kong tignan.=|

“Huh? May sectioning na? Ano sec ko?”

“Syempre…Charles ka! The highest section in Third year! “ Si Karl.

“Eh…kayo?”

“Archimedes kami lahat! The second highest section in third year!”

“Ahhh…sa Archimedes nalang ako…”

*Pak*

“Aray Marl! “ Awww:crybaby:

“Sira ka pala eh! Dun ka na nga sa Charles! Diba dun rin si Jenny? Edi klasmeyts kayu! Diba? Mas madali mo syang mapasagot kung ganun…:eh:” Oo nga no?

*Isip mode*

“O ano?” Si Gian. Nakisabay rin ang loko.

“Nice idea:eh:. “

“So?” Silang lahat. Aba, sabay pa!

“Secret nalang yun…”:eh::eh::eh:

“Eh kung…anuhin naming yang mukha mo?” Haha. Di naman maloko tong si Gian.

“O sige…eto ang plano…sdhfchxkfhdfhkvckvnfhdgh” *secret pa nya yun LOL*

“Cool!!  pare…”:cool::cool:

Hayan…namili na kami ng construction materials. At umuwi na ako 6:00 PM. Hay..natagalan.



JENNY

Time check. 6:00 PM

Hayyyyy…

Andilim dilim na. *yawns*

Hmmm…ano kaya ginagawa ng unggoy nay un? Hmmm…nakauwi na kaya yun? San kaya yun galing? Hmmm…only one way to find out!

*Pagbukas nya sa pinto…*

“ Gising ka na?”:o

“Ay unggoy! Hmp! Obvious ba? Bat ka ba nangugulat..ha?!”:mad:

“Sorry …sorry! Pabukas na sana ako ng pinto eh para tignan kung gising ka na...”

“Yeah right…whatever. Dennis, one question.”

“Ano yun?”

“Naka-drugs ka ba?”:smoke:

“Hah! Watta question!”:doubt:

“Eh kasi…parang…ambait bait mo…ewan ko sayo! Di ka naman ganyan!”

“Mabait din ako no-“







































































*brownout*:o


ano kaya mangyayari? Abangan! Chapter 4 part 2!

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#53  2008-11-15 21:15:16

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

:o first to comment :o  :lol:

weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D

:crybaby: 2loy pa din pala ang "pustahan nila kay Jenny :crybaby: sana wag na i2loy ni Dennis ang "pustahan" nila ng friends nya :) just for a car :(

ano na nga kaya ang mangyayari ngaung magksama sa iisang bubong cxla Dennis at Jenny :eh:

=) can't w8 for the next update =)


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Hindi malaman kung alin ang dapat sundin.
Ang isip na nagsasabi ng dapat o ang pusong nagmamahal ng tapat??   



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#54  2008-11-16 00:11:43

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

wow nice stori...
update nah..

btw. new reader here.


don't know when i'll be back.. see you soon FU!

#55  2008-11-16 04:19:34

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well f i have some free time super busy sophomore kasi ako ehh :crybaby: i like d names of the characters ha=)!!! MAYBE yaya ikay s cute, cute kasi pangalan nya:lol:


everything changes!!!
                   
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they say time is your greatest enemy! but i don't know f its true!!!

#56  2008-11-16 04:31:07

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

filpinadk wrote:

first to comment   

weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

2loy pa din pala ang "pustahan nila kay Jenny  sana wag na i2loy ni Dennis ang "pustahan" nila ng friends nya  just for a car

ano na nga kaya ang mangyayari ngaung magksama sa iisang bubong cxla Dennis at Jenny

can't w8 for the next update

sana nga. haha.

maybe i'll update later or tomorrow or..ewan! busy kasi eh! :D

dess29 wrote:

wow nice stori...
update nah..

btw. new reader here.

..thanks po!

i'll update soon!

supahgreenaholic wrote:

well f i have some free time super busy sophomore kasi ako ehh  i like d names of the characters ha=)!!! MAYBE yaya ikay s cute, cute kasi pangalan nya:lol:

hehe. sophomore ka rin? same tayo. :D

BTW. I got the name Ikay from my classmate! haha.

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talagang makulit c clint ha !! eh nasaan na ba c sophie:paranoid::paranoid:


everything changes!!!
                   
                and your future lies on your own hands!!!




they say time is your greatest enemy! but i don't know f its true!!!

#58  2008-11-16 04:40:19

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wow same tayong sophomore and yung pangalan ng teacher ni jenny parang nag reremind sya sa stat namin ang strict kasi ehh BTW idol ko c  jacques alexandre charles his a good chemist kasi ehh=)=)=) i really like talaga d story kahit tapos ko ng bumasa binabasa ko ulit na kikilig kasi ako sa kanila ehh


everything changes!!!
                   
                and your future lies on your own hands!!!




they say time is your greatest enemy! but i don't know f its true!!!

#59  2008-11-16 09:23:47

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

to supahgreenaholic:

please avoid double posting..

hmm..

teka..

may I know your name? I think I know you..

@topic:

BTW.

guys!..i'll update ..maybe tomorrow..!

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#60  2008-11-16 11:28:16

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..late na aq ditooo!!

tsk3!!

neweiz,, nice update carmz!!

hehehhe..

:)

galing ah!!




update na! :)

wait aq! :thumbsup::thumbsup:



let'z be STRONG!

i know we can DO this!
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