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#1  2008-10-25 14:36:07

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The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove
(Carmx's AKA alemracloveyajr's 1st story)

started: October 25, 2008
ended: --still going!

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Guyz! I'm sorry if my tagalog is not that good and also my English! But I think you'll understand it naman! :)

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The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove (Are you willing to give up everything?)


Tragedy is a word which means "a disastrous event"...

Tragedy is on our way...


Tragedy is our destiny...

But in being in LOVE, do you believe that tragedy is present?






LOVE is mad...

You are willing to believe...


take a chance...


and give up everything...

Not thinking what will happen...
                        and meet the tragedy

just to see him/her HAPPY...

                 just to know he's or she's alright...

just to let him/her know you love him/her...

If all people would do anything...

...who will meet the tragedy?

Who will be the instrument of the destiny?

What surprises you is that...

                      "It's okay..."





............is it really okay?


Prologue:

City Hillsview Cemetery

    I still felt the guilt. Why love? Love killed him. And if he never loved me, he’ll still be living. Being in love is really a great tragedy. But, his sacrifice changed everything. It made everything right. And I know, God did planned this…for a purpose.

    I can’t forget the memories we had before. He is always there when I need him. He always comforts me when I’m in pain. He saved me in everything…

    I never thought he’ll love me this much. I never thought he’s willing to sacrifice for the sake of my happiness. I never thought he’ll do this.

    He’s my guardian angel now and before and the instrument of my happiness. Yes, I’ve been close to accidents and I know, he’s still saving me. Now, I am happy, very happy…but the guilt still stirs in my heart. He told me not to worry because it’s okay. But, I don’t know…shouldn’t I worry?

“Why are you crying mommy? Because of tito?”

He is also the instrument of having Deniel, my daughter. Because he chose my happiness over his own. Having Deniel is my happiness and having Deniel’s father is the reason for his death-it’s still my happiness.

“Deniel…”

“Mommy…you’re still guilty right?”

She knows it. I told her.

“Mom, diba he said it’s okay? Don’t cry mommy…don’t cry…”

I can’t speak up. I still don’t know what to do.

“Mommy…is he in heaven na?”

I’m kinda surprised to her question. I don’t know.

“I-“

Wooooooooooshh! A strong wind blowing. Whispering I’m here…

I know it’s him. He’ll never go unless he knows I’m happy and... lost my guilt.

“Deniel, I think that’s the answer to your question…”

To my surprise…Deniel’s dad spoke up.


INTRODUCTION OF CHARACTERS


JENNIFER CARMEL SCANT

Also known as JENNY.
She is smart, beautiful and probably one of the most popular student of CHU (City Hillsview University)- High School Department because of her beauty (pangMiss Universe ata to) and brains (take note, from first year, 1st honor na sya). But sad to say, hindi siya tumatanggap ng boyfriend. Many tried, but failed. Her reasons? "Because I'm too busy for that! Sagabal lang yan sa aking pag-aaral. Boys are just headaches. and...I only love ONE person." (secret lang po muna kung sino ha? You'll know soon.) Kaya ayun! Walang sinagot. Even the "crush ng bayan" boys? BUSTED! Almost all of the handsome and popular boys (kahit yung hindi nga eh!) courted her, pero, wala talagang sinagot. Ang pinaka-gwapo "daw" ang hindi pa sumubok...

DENNIS DYLAN PEREZ

Also known as DENNIS.
He is the most playboy student of CHU (alam nyo na meaning dba?)- High School Dpartment. Imagine? limang babae ang nade-date araw araw? (take note! Iba-iba ha?). Kahit alam ng mga lokang babae na playboy siya, stick with him parin. Eh pano naman kasi, ang gwapo gwapo niya! Eto pa! He's good in playing piano, playing guitar, he also had a good voice, he also plays basketball (point guard lang siya okay? Over naman kung captain...ehh...Hindi pa siya Senior no! Siguro kung senior na siya...aryt?) and matalino rin siya! Baliw lang talaga siya sa kanyang mga kaibigan kaya hayun, nung second grading ng first year, nagpalipat agad sa Kepler (I-Kepler is the second section of the Science class of First year and I-Newton sana ang section niya nun nung first year pa sya na section rin ni Jenny) para makasama yung mga barkada nyang loko loko din. Actually, bad influence ang mga yun kasi sila ang nagturo kay Dennis na maging playboy! Ahahaha! Mga BI! Galing no? Eto pa! Have I told you that he is Jenny's number one enemy? Yes he is! Para silang aso at pusa tuwing umaga. Pano kasi, sinisira lagi ni Dennis ang araw ni Jenny. Bakit nga ba naman kasi naging kapitbahay pa sila?

*In that situation, will they ever experience the TRAGEDY of Bein' inlove?*

Let's find out how love changed everything, how love discovered fate and how love created a TRAGEDY between two opposite people...

The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove...(Are you willing to give up everything?)

OTHER CHARACTERS


JOHN RICHIE SUAREZ

Also known as JAY-AR but Jenny calls him JOHN.
He is the bestfriend of Jenny. He is good (super!), understanding (grabe!) and most of all, GWAPO! Too bad Jenny only see him as a bestfriend. Unlike her, Jay-ar sees Jenny as the most beautiful girl he wanna be with. The day he met Jenny, he immediately felt something for her. But he was totally TORPE! Lagi nalang nyang tinatago ang nararamdaman niya for her. Okay lang sa kanya ang makasama siya, makausap at maging BESTFRIEND forever. At yun ang masakit! Masakit na masakit...

SOPHIA ANGELA DOMINGO

Also known as SOPHIE.
She is also the bestfriend of Jenny-but plastic! Yes...totoo po yun! Dumidikit lang siya kay Jenny for the sake of popularity. She is also beautiful pero pangMiss Barangay lang...LOL! She's one of Dennis' flings and she's totally IN to Dennis. Pero nung nalaman niya na sumeryoso si Dennis kay Jenny (Sumeryoso kaya?)... She formulated one goal..."To destroy Jenny" ...in a secretive way...

RJAY LAWENCE CONCEPCION

Also known as AR-AR.
He is the nerd friend of Dennis. Siya lang yata ang matino sa kanilang barkada. Oo...gwapo siya pero hindi siya sumasali sa kalokohan ng mga ito. Siya pa yata ang bumibisto sa kanilang kalokohan minsan. Wondered why di pa siya natatalsik sa kanilang barkada? Right timing kasi siyang bumibisto eh, yung walang nasasaktan. Ngayong alam niya ang pinakamasakit na salitang pwede niyang sabihin kay Jenny, the only girl of his dreams, magiging "right" timing din kaya ang kanyang desisyon to make everything right?

DANIEL HOMER SISON

Also known as DANNY.
He is the childhood friend of Jenny. He thought Jenny everything na hindi sana maranasan ni Jenny. (Curious kung ano ang mga yun? Secret muna...malalaman nyo rin yun! Pero wag kayong mag-isip ng kung anu-ano ha?) They just separated because Danny will fly to America for some reasons :crybaby:. Siya pa naman ang first love ni Jenny (Oo...tama yun!) Kaya labis na nasaktan si Jenny when he flew away! (Uy, bata pa borken-hearted na? Tsk.) But she'll wait for him because he promised Jenny that he will come back in no time at all. Kung babalik nga siya, will Jenny feel the same way to him just like what she felt before?

*With those people around, is it possible for Dennis and Jenny to find love even in a tragic way?*

Oops! Hanggang dun lang! Wait ko comment nyo!

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#2  2008-10-25 17:22:16

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yep sis..
ukei un storii muh..
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#3  2008-10-25 21:27:18

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alemracloveyajr wrote:

I'll post the picz,videos and musics soon!

ei..melay.. ur not readin' the rules..! :rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

wala lng.. hehe.. since ur my bestie,
i'm warnin' u.. haha.. apl2 unya di ga.basa xa rules..LOL

lahi ra jud..:lol:

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#4  2008-10-26 01:17:11

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:)hmmm...can i lock it muna? I have no time to post some chapters eh! :):):)

I'll be out for 3 days...

Aya...i meant the links...not the videos...hehe! :D

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I continued nalang...for the sake of other's request...

post transferred. above ^^^^

lewl.

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hmm..
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..wh0ah!! i just read this hup!!

part talaga t0?? ba't ngaun q lang nlaman mer0n pa palang gani2 bag0 chapter 1.. :paranoid:

ahihihi.. :)

wh0's DEnieL?? :question:

and m0mmy??:question:

agui.. iba nato ahh..

g0 g0 g0!!

c0ntinue chapter 1 my fwend!!

i'LL supp0rt this!!

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let'z be STRONG!

i know we can DO this!
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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

melay!!

you ddn't let us read the prologue!!

ni hindi ko nga alam na meron eh!
naks!!

ganda nito!! epal ang di susuporta!!

nyahaha!!

i labyu melay.. grbeh..nyehee

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Sorry for late update...We visit pa kasi the deads...you know na...Anyways, eto na...Hehe..Trayan, secret muna yun...Anyways, part one pa lang toh!! May part two pa..Thanks for reading...

Aya, now pa ang prologue!! Go,go,go!!!!

CHAPTER ONE- The  Cat and the Mouse Part I

“Daniel!!!!”:D

Oo…si Daniel…my long lost friend…is back! I can’t wait to see him, hug him. I really miss him. I really do. Were in the City Hillsview airport and waiting for his comeback. 7 years din kaming di nagkita. Kaya…sabik na sabik na talaga ako.
I was on a rush. Tumatakbo talaga ako na parang may humahabol na aso sakin. Malapit na…malapit na-

* * *
TIGITIGIDIGTIGTIG BANG TIGTIG BANG!!!

“AaaaaaaaHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!”:crybaby::crybaby::crybaby:

I can’t take it! For a million times, sinira nanaman ni Dennis ang panaginip ko! Argh! Imagine? Malapit na talaga! Malapit na malapit na talaga. Tapos, sisirain lang ng Dennis na yan? Anong trip nanaman ba to?

“Dennis! I hate you!!!!!”

Teka teka…Tumutugtog siya ng drums? Dati rati, gitara lang at piano ang tinutugtog niya. Eh ngayon…drums nanaman? Ewan ko ba sa unggoy na to. Walang magawa sa buhay!

Aish…nakakainis! Araw-araw…sinisira nya ang araw ko…ano ba ‘to? Minamalas na yata ako sa kanya! Kung hindi ko lang kailangan mamahay sa Tita ko ditto…edi sana…noon pa ako umalis dito.

Tama. Namahay ako dito dahil nandun ang parents ko sa abroad. May business problems kasi sila dun at hindi ako sinama. Alangan naman dun ako sa mansion(sosyal!) namin? Eh nakakatakot kaya! At mas mabuti nang dito ako manirahan kina tita dahil malapit lang ang village nila sa school.

Tok! Tok! Tok!

“Jennifer Carmel? What’s the problem? Binubulabog mo ang buong bahay ah!”:disgust:

Aish! Si tita pala…Oo…siya ang may-ari ng bahay na ito. She is doctor and because she is a very good doctor, yumaman siya in her own way at nagpatayo ng hospital. Actually, wala siyang family kasi she’s so busy with her work. Marami naman siyang manliligaw pero di niya pinapansin. Hindi naman yaman ang gusto sa kanya dahil marami naman siyang manliligaw na mayaman…maganda naman talaga siya.

“Tita, Jenny nalang po.”

I hate it dahil complete name talaga ang tinatawag sakin. Too formal eh.

“Okay, okay Jenny, what’s the problem? Why are you shouting?”

“Eh kasi tita…yung unggoy nay un *sabay turo sa kabilang bahay kung saan naroroon si Dennis sa kanilang band room, tumutugtog ng drums* ay ginising ako.”

TGIDIGIG TIG BANG!

“Narinig mo? Ang ingay ingay! Paano ako makakatulog nito? Ang ingay talaga! Hmp!”:mad:

“Ahhh…Hehe! *natatawa na naaawa na sabi niya, hmp* Masanay kana jan Jenn, alam mo naman na yan ang ginagawa niya araw araw diba? That Dennis sure loves music at kahit anong instruments ang ginagamit niya para makatugtog…Hmmm…you can sleep at my room Jenn, hindi maingay dun…”

“No thanks Tita Nicole. Kung hindi niyo mapagsabihan ang Dennis na yan, ako nalang. For two years of living here, hindi talaga ako nasanay sa kanya at ayokong masanay! This time…pagsasabihan ko na siya! Titigil na talaga siya at basta! Dapat tumigil na siya or else…”

Tumakbo na ako palabas. Narinig kong sumigaw si Tita  na wag nalang pero nagpatuloy parin ako. Anong akala ng unggoy na yun sakin? Natatakot sa kanya? Well, pwes! Papasok na talaga ako sa bahay nila at pagsasabihan. Kung ayaw nyang makinig…hindi niya magugustuhan kung ano ang gagawin ko sa kanya…Hahahaha!

Anyways, I'm Jennifer Carmel Scant, Jenny for short okay?? Magthird year na ako this coming school year kaya two years na ako naninirahan dito. When I graduated elementary, nagfly na ang parents ko kaya sa bahay na ako ni Tita tumira bago ako naghigh school. I like it here naman kaya lang...yung unggoy lang yun talaga ang ewan eh!! Yun lang talaga ang sumisira ng araw ko. Kasi naman, nung una, gitara nya ang gumising sakin...yung electric guitar...sunod naman, yung piano niya...di nga maingay pero nakakairita!! Alam mo ang ginawa nya? Nagpeplay sya ng piano na parang bata...imagine nyo? Basta!! Yung parang ewan maglaro...yung parang beginner lang!! Magaling naman siya eh pero ewan lang sa kanya!! Exercise daw niya yun!! Duh!! So much 'bout it! Huh? Yung unggoy? Siya nga pala si Dennis Dylan Perez. Dennis nalang tawag nyo sa kanya. All I can say about him is...para syang unggoy!! Gets?! Wag nang umangal...:D

Nagdoor bell na ako sa bahay nila.

*Dingdong! Dingdong*

Lumabas agad si Yaya Tipay-yaya ng unggoy.

“Oh! Jenny, napaaga ka ata? Bagong gising? Hmmm…halika…pasok!”

OMG! Bagong gising pala ako noh? Naka-sleeping attire pa ako (shorts at spaghetti). Aish…pakialam ko? Kahit puno pa ng laway ang mukha ko…wala akong pakialam. Kahit naka-bra lang ako at panty…wala parin akong pakialam. Wala akong planong magpaganda at mag-ayos sa harap ng Dennis na yan noh!

“Ahehehe! Salamat! Oo nga…bagong gising pa ako…San nga po ba ang amo nyo?”

Yes! Pa-angel epek pa ako. Parang makikipag-chika lang o may hihiramin o whatever lang ako sa kanya…di naman!:D

“Ah…si Sir Dennis ba kamo? Ehh..nandun lang siya sa band room. Alam mo naman kung saan yun diba? Sige…akyat ka lang. Bukas ang pinto dun. Kakahatid ko lang ng coffee. Teka…gusto mo ng kape?”

“Ahhh…no thanks Yaya Tipay. May sasabihin lang ako sa unggoy na yun…” Oops!:wallbash:

“Ha? Ano kamo?” Ayan tuloy!

“Ha? May sinasabi ba ako? Ikaw talaga Yaya. Sige…punta na ako!”

Hehehehe! Ganyan kasimple magpalusot! Hehehehe!

“Sige…Sya sya…puntahan mo na ang unggoy na yun…*sabay kindat*”;]

Ngek! Narinig naman pala…Ehhh…wala akong lusot.

“Kayo talaga Yaya…narinig mo pala. Hehe. Sige…punta na ako…”

“O sige…kung may kailangan ka, sa kusina lang ako ha?”

“Okay!” sabay akyat sa taas. Oo nga…bukas ang pinto…buti’t di maingay dahil nagkakape pa siguro.

“Dennis!!!” sigaw ko. Nagulat siya at muntik ng mahulog ang kape na hinahawakan niya. Ang mukha nya? Ganito oh-->:o Nagbago lang nang mapasino kung sino ang naroon.

“Uy! Jenny…napaaga ata ang ligaw mo ah? Record breaking ata.”:D

Nagawa pang magbiro ng unggoy na to? Haizzz…ang lalaki kasing ito…sanay na binibisita ng mga babae.

“Excuse me Dennis…hindi ako pumunta dito para-“

“Wala kang dalang something for me? Tsk! Okay lang yun *tinignan niya si Jenny mula ulo hanggang paa* Kahit bagong gising ka…sexy ka parin naman. *nakangisi nyang sabi*”:eh:

*Namula si Jenny sa sinabi ni Dennis*

Aish! Naka sleeping attire nga pala ako. My gawd! Manyakis pala ang lokong ito ah! Argh! Manyak! Manyak!:mad:

“There, there…don’t be shy! Halika nga dito…*up and down pa ang dalawang kilay niya*”:eh:

Nyak! Anong balak ng unggoy na to? Manyak talaga!:mad:

“Aishh…sandali lang ha? Kukunin ko lang ang something to give ko para sayo. Wait lang! *sabay labas*”:D

Hahahaha! Humanda ka unggoy! Kung ayaw mong makinig sa mga sinasabi ko, bahala ka! Ngayon…wala ka a talagang masasabi sa plan B ko…wahahaha! Patay ka ngayon!=D

*Papunta si Jenny sa kitchen kung saan naroroon si Yaya Tipay (remember her?Yun na yun) *

“Excuse me Yaya Tipay…uhmmm…you have something…uhmmm…big knife?” What? Big knife?;]

“Ano? Ehhh…ahha! Meron…eh…aanhin mo?” Aanhin ko nga ba?

“Ahh…basta! Kailangan ko lang…Basta…” Sige na…please?:D

“Oo na…sige na…eto oh…”

“Thank you…” Wow! Laki nito ah…hmmmm…:)

*Pumasok na si Jenny sa band room ni Dennis…napansin agad ni Dennis kaya…*

“What took you so long? Asan na ang…WAAAAAAAAAAA!! Ano yan? Jenn…Jenn…Anong gagawin mo ha? Teka…teka…” Ngek! Takot? Mukha syang ewan…*evil laugh*=D

“Patay ka ngayon!!”

“Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggg!!!!!!”:o



































“TIGSH! BAGG BANGKTS!!!” :O

Chapter One Part II bukas na!! Comments please...Thanks!!!!

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..weeee!! first to comment!!
..ngaun palang talaga namin nabsa yang prlogue na yan ha..

neweiz..

go girl!!

susuportahan q t0!!

update na!!


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hmm..
ukei sis..
i'll wait..

tnx sis...


fLutterblue07 wrote:

..weeee!! first to comment!!
..ngaun palang talaga namin nabsa yang prlogue na yan ha..

neweiz..

go girl!!

susuportahan q t0!!

update na!!

Ahehehe...I made some changes...I lost the original copy eh...anyways...

Hahaha...keep supporting...

I'll surely continue posting...coz...you know...

malilimutan ko 'to...hahaha...

I had another story in my mind na naman...pero...

sa susunod nalang...mataas ata ang stoy na 'to...=)

ang obvious na maraming silent readers...hehe...

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#14  2008-11-01 15:30:03

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..hahahha!!

"SIS"

neweiz..

that's why i wondered why there are some new lines..

hahaha.. :lol:

update nah!


let'z be STRONG!

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#15  2008-11-01 15:33:53

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

fLutterblue07 wrote:

..hahahha!!

"SIS"

neweiz..

that's why i wondered why there are some new lines..

hahaha..

update nah!

dang...adeeek kana

wahahaha...

kawp...bukas pa update yah know...i'm not finished wid my net eh...or not started...wahahaha...

awkward no?

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#16  2008-11-02 06:03:30

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

I'm really not fond of posting girl. But because i'm totally BITIN, please update na~~~

...missymisspopular is supahdupah busy!!! Hihihi...

sorry for being inactive...

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#17  2008-11-02 06:23:41

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I'm really not fond of posting girl. But because i'm totally BITIN, please update na~~~

Haha. really? Don't worry po...I'll update na..later on..

comments are highly appreciated...:)

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#18  2008-11-02 07:03:46

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ah! really? ok! I'll wait po. update na!!!

...missymisspopular is supahdupah busy!!! Hihihi...

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#19  2008-11-02 07:23:56

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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

..wat??!

..ilang layers kana sa net mo??

hay..


update na kc..

bnibitin mo tuloy yung iba..

go sis!

baka malimutan mo pah..

hihihii,,.


let'z be STRONG!

i know we can DO this!
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Re: The TRAGEDY of Bein' Inlove^^ chapter 11 -To be HURT? :[

O...eto na po..haha..sori for late update ha? :)

“TIGSH! BAGG BANGKTS!!!” :O


Part II

Hah! Wala nang malas. Wala na. Wala nang maingay tuwing umaga. Sira na! Sira na! Wahahahahaha!!!=D

Hephep! Hindi ko pinatay si Dennis ha? Kala nyo…Anong tingin nyo sakin? Killer? Ngek! Hindi si Dennis ang patay…ang DRUMS!!!

“Wha-what? Jenn! Ba-bakit mo …sinira??? Jenny naman eh.” Nakakaawa.:(

Yan ang bagay sayo! Kasalanan mo yan! Hindi mo pinatatahimik ang buhay ko. Kaya yan ang napala mo! Ble!!:P

“What? Ano ba ang ginawa ko? Gusto ko rin namang tumugtog ah! Kaya lang…nasira! Fake!” Oops!

“Jenny naman eh! Sira ka ba? Ba’t mo sinira? Alam mo? Tutugtog ako ngayong pasukan! Nag-eensayo ako…ayan tuloy…anon a ang gagawin ko? Aish! Kainis ka!” :angry:

Kung nakikita nyo lang ang mukha niya, para syang ewan! Wakiki!

Para kasi syang iiyak nag galit na parang sasabog na parang…ewan talaga! Ang sarap tumawa! Wehehehehe! Kaya lang…parang sasabog na ata to…Hala!:(+:mad:+:crybaby:+:angry:=DENNIS

“Eh, kasalanan mo kasi yan! Ang ingay ingay mo! As in to the highest level! Hmp! Jan ka na nga lang!” Weeeee! Sana makatakas. Ayokong masabugan eh!:penguin:

“Jenny! Pagbayaran mo to!!! Pagba-“

Wala na akong narinig…gusto ko nang tumawa ng pagkalakas lakas! Wahahahahahaha! Ang cute cute nya! Grabe! Teka…sinabi kong cute? Tsk. Erase cute! Nagkamali lang…kayo talaga…lahat tayo nagkakamali okay?

Para pala syang…hmmm…unggoy! Tama! Aish…unggoy nap ala yun noh? Hehehe…Uwi na me! I wanna LOL!

*paalis na si Jenny nang-*

“Pssst! Jenn…ano ba ang ginawa mo kay Sir? Bakit…parang…sumisigaw yun ng pagkalakas lakas?” Oops! Pahamak ka talaga Yaya Tipay. Maya nyan, makarecover na yun…maabutan pa ako…

“Ahhh…ehhh…kasi…nabaliw! Oo tama! Alam nyo na…diba may sayad yun? Diba? O sige…lipad na ako…kain na daw kami ni Tita-“

“Aha! Bumalik ka dito!!!” Nyaks! Nakahabol! Ang bilis makarecover ah! Well, gotta run!:penguin::penguin:

“Waaaaaaaahhhhhh!!! Unggoy! Ble!” Hehehehe…at tumakbo na ako palabas. Sinarado ko ang gate at naglagay pa ng malaking bato para may harang! That’s the spirit! Para din a ako mahabol ng unggoy na yun noh! Galing ko no?! Oops! Need to run na pala!:penguin:

*Tumatakbo si Jenny nang mabilis ng-*

BOGSH!

“Aray! Ano ba? Sino-“ :o

“Oops! Jen…relax lang! Hinahabol ka ng aso? Ikaw kasi eh! Pati aso pinapatulan! Hehehe!” Ngek! Si John pala! Nang-iinis pa!:angry:

Anyways, he’s John Richie Suarez. They call him Jay-ar but I like John lang. Walang aangal kundi…LOL. Anyways, he’s my bestfriend. Long story kung pano kami nagmeet. Basta, malalaman nyo rin. Haha. Mabait tong friend ko. Laging concern, understanding din. Haha. Ewan. Nababakla na ata siguro to sakin. LOL. I love him very very much as a friend. Ang bait kasi eh. Hulog ng langit. Ewan ko ba at bakit nagtagal ang friendship namin eh. Ang sama ko at sya, mabait. Hahai. Pasalamat ka nga Jenny at may friend kang ganyan. Ginto yan eh. Okay. Balik na tayo. Dami pa kasing chika eh. LOL

“Che! Sira! Alam mo namang di ako takot sa aso eh! Teka! Anong bagyo ang nagdala sayo dito John?” Hehehe! Hindi naman sya taga-dito eh…

“Sira! Napadaan lang ako no! Para…para…”:/

“Para puntahan ako kasi miss mo ako! Diba? Miss mo ako? Aminin…”

JOHN’S or JAY-AR’S POV

Oo…miss na miss kita.

Oo! I miss her so…God knows how much! Basta! Miss ko siya. Three days kaming di nagkita kasi pumunta kami sa Lolo ko sa probinsya. Basta! Wag masyadong matanong! Oo! Three days lang pero parang one week na! Ganyan ko kamahal ang bestie ko! Oops!

“Kapal mo Jenn. I-ikaw? Ma-mamimiss ko? Mmas mamiss ko ang a-aso nyong si Kiana ke-esa sayo no! Ta-tatlong a-araw la-ang akong nawala-“ *Nabubulol si John kasi grabe ang ngiti ni Jenny…nakakaloka*:D

“Haynaku John! Kilala na kita! Basta ganyan ka magsalita na parang tuloy-tuloy na bulol? Alam kong nagsisinungaling ka..” Oo! Alam mo yun pero nabubulol din ako dahil sa iyong ngiti no!

Ngumiti siya ng matamis tapos…..Niyakap ako? Tama ba ‘to?:O:O:O

Lub-dub! Lub-dub! Lub-dub!:wow:

*Kung nasa kaso kayo ni John na madly inlove kay Jenny…tumitigil ang mundo nyo at parang may kumakanta na parang…ewan…*

Now playing: You and Me

What time is it? And in what month?
This clock never seemed so alive. I can’t keep up and I can’t back down
I’ve been losing so much time
‘Cause it’s you and me and all of the people with nothing to do
Nothing to lose
And it’s you and me and all other people
And I don’t know why, I can’t keep my eyes off of you

*It’s kinda OA pero kung kayo ang nasa posisyon ni John…you’ll realize it’s different!*

Natauhan na ako ng bigla syang bumitaw.

“Alam mo John…miss din kita. Kasi…wala na ako ka-chika eh! I’m so sad eh!” Nagpout pa sya. Cute talaga!

“Sabi ko na nga ba’t di mo ako matitiis eh!” Ginagawa lang kasi ako nitong kaCHIKA! Ano ako? Bakla? Ngek! “Teka…ba’t ka nga ba tumatakbo kanina?”

“Ay! Oo nga! Hinabol kasi ako ng Unggoy! Alam mo na…! Basta! Kwento ko sayo sa loob”:eh:

“Unggoy?”Parang alam ko na kung sino ah! Hindi naman sa mukha syang unggoy…yun lang naman ang kaaway ni Jenny dito eh…=|

“Sino pa edi si Dennis! Dennis Dylan Perez!” sabi ko na nga ba eh! 

“Ahhhh…ikaw talaga…Teka… Pasok na nga tayo! Para kang ewan sa suot mo eh…Mamaya…may magrecruit sayo nyan…BUGAW!” Heheh! Actually…di sya mukhang bugaw! Sexy pa nga eh! Wala lang…trip ko lang!:D

“Kaw talaga! Hali-“

“JENNYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!” :mad:
Ay! Nakakagulat! Teka…Dennis? Galit ata ah!

“Takbo!!!”:penguin::penguin::penguin: sigaw ni Jenny. Kaya ayun! Pasok na kami sa bahay ng tita niya. Din a kami naabutan ni Dennis. Humihingal hingal na kami ni Jenny. Whew! Teka…ano kaya ang ginawa ni Jenny sa kanya? Ba’t galit yun?

DENNIS’ POV
Damn! Naisahan ako ng Jenny nay un ah! Tsk. Sayang yung drums ko! Padala pa naman yun ni Daddy! Grrrrrrrrr! Di ko inasahang gagawin nya yun! Taray ng  babaeng yun ah!

Well, dapat bayaran nya yun no! Aish…magbibilang nalang ako ng kasalanan! Hihihih!

Pero…ang ganda nya ah! Kahit bagong gising! Grabe! Oops! Teka? Maganda? erase! Erase! Hindi sya maganda! Witch sya! Oo! Witch!:D

Pero…ba’t parang nakokonsyensya ako? Parang gusto kong mag….SORRY? Sira ba ako? Bakit naman? Siya ang may kasalanan at ako ang magSORRY? Eto pa…never in my whole life pa ako nagSORRY no! Hay! Ewan! Gutom lang siguro to! Ipapagmalaki ko pa sana sa mga girls ko mamaya ang drums! Tsk! Sayang…Well, ayokong sumipot sa mga dates ko ngayon…rest in peace muna ako…hayyyyy…:wallbash:

BACK TO JOHN’S POV
“Jenny, ano ba ang ginawa mo kay Dennis at bakit parang…galit nag alit ata yun?” I smell something evil JENNY here! :evil:

“Hehehehe! Alam mo kasi John! Sinira ko drums nya!” WHAT?:o

“Jenn…?”

“Hehehehe! Oo na! Oo na! Sinira kasi niya dreams ko eh…about Danny na naman kasi dreams ko…Malapit n asana…kaya lang…sinira ni Dennis! Ang lakas magpapatugtog ng drums eh!” OUCH! Si Danny na naman? Ewan! Nakakainis! She really loves Danny…ang sakit!:doubt:

Ngayon oh…tignan nyo ang mukha. Nagdedaydream? Aish…gisingin ko na nga.:rolleyes:

“Huiz…pangit! Gising!”:D

“Ahh..ehh…wah …ahh…no?” O tignan nyo? Nananaginip nga! Ginising ko lang! Bwahahaha!

“Dun ka sa kwarto mo matulog! Wag dito!”

“Ahehehe…ehhh…kasi…iniisip ko na naman si-“

“Si Danny? Haizzzz…ewan ko sayo! Ewan na ewan talaga! Maiwan na nga kita! Bibili pa ako ng construction materials eh!” Ayokong makinig sa detalye! Masyadong masakit sa puso! Hahai…why am I loving pa kasi my bestfriend?=|

“Ay! Oo nga! Kailangan pala yun noh? Pwedeng bukas kana bumili John? Sige na…para sama ako…please:D???” Ang laki ng ngiti! Parang ewan! Mahihindian ko ba ito? Mahal ko ata ito eh!:wow:

“Oo na! Ang lakas mo ata sakin!”

“Thank you John! Thank you very very very much! Thank you talaga! One o clock ha?” Anak ng tipaklong. ! One o clock? Parang date ah! Edi maganda! One o clock sharp! Nandito na ako! Hihihi…:D

“Sure. One o clock! Sige…gotta go!”

“Ok! Bye!” Bye na nga! Hahaha. Nakakaloka sya.

Back to JENNY
Hahaiz. Cute ng bestie ko! Ang bait bait talaga! :)

Early in the morning 8:OOa.m.

Hahaiz…wala atang ingay ah. Sabagay, wala na naman ang drums nun. Pero diba may gitara at piano pa yun? Ahhh…takot din sigurong masira. Haha. Pero nakapagtataka nga lang. Walang ingay, walang gulo. Nakapagtataka!  Aish…Jenny…pasalamat ka nga at walang distorbo eh! Gusto mo yatang magpa-istorbo? Dang! Shut up ka nga! Nagtataka nga lang ako eh! :wallbash:

Eto talaga ang sakit ni Jenny, kinakausap ang sarili! Hayaan nyo na yun! LOL:)

“*Yawns*…Hahaiz. I’m getting hungry na…Oh well! Better eat na!”:D

*Laking gulat ni Jenny nang mapagbuksan nya ang pinto…may nakita syang hindi nya inaasahang makita! *




























































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