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#1 2008-10-21 18:51:27

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★ Once Upon A Shooting Star- Chapter 20 - Part 2 [THE END] ★

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Started: Oct. 21. 2oo8 Ended: Dec. 20. 2oo8

Once upon a shooting star
by Rocel

Chapter 1

And it all started here…

“Tiriririririiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!!

”

“Again?

” I said while stretching my arms to reach my irritating alarm clock. Hays..Another day, another chapter of my damn life. It’s the first day of school after our Christmas Vacation.

“Good morning Yaya

” I greeted habang pababa ng hagdan.

“Oh good morning Annie, gising ka na pala akala ko pupuntahan pa kita sa kwarto mo eh”

“Yup, nag-alarm po kasi ako eeh. What’s for breakfast?” I asked.

“Naghanda ako ng fried rice, hotdogs at omelet meron din tinapay diyan fresh from panaderya, haha

!” Haha. Yaya talaga. xD

“Thanks Yaya, BTW, where’s Dad?

”

“Nakaalis na, may business trip daw ulit eeh”

“Oh, okey

….what’s new..tsk

” I sighed.

I finished my breakfast and quickly went upstaires to take a shower. I made my things all done last night kaya hindi na ako magkakanda-ugaga ngayon. I went down and kissed my cutie little doggie goodbye. Sumakay na ako sa car.

“Morning kuya Andres! Konting bilis tayo ngayon ah baka ma-late tayo eeh

”

“Gandang umaga Annie, aga aga pa ma-le-late ka na agad! haha!”

“Hay naku kuya, para namang hindi mo kilala `tong sasakyan na `toh laging wrong timing masiraan may topak manang mana sa driver. Haha!

” I joked, We laughed and kuya Andres started the engine.

On the way, I turned my I-pod on to kill the boredom

. GAWD

! Traffic pa . Ayun, after 20 million years nakarating na kami sa school.

"Bye kuya, text ko nalang ikaw kapag magpapasundo na ako ha."

"Okey, ingat ka ha, lagi yang pinapaalala sakin ng Yaya mo eeh. Hehe" And hop-he-goes.

"Chessssssssssss!!

"

I looked around, at ayun nga si Elise yung bestfriend kong loka-loka na pagka-lakas-lakas ng boses pero kahit ganyan yan love na love ko pa rin yan. Haha.

“Oh Eli, anong meron at my shouting-my-name ka pang ginawa ha?” pagtataray ko.

“Baliw! Na-missed kaya kita. loka ka kasi `di ka man lang nag-text. Hmp!

” And here she go again with her walang kamatayan na Tampo-sickness.

“Gaga, tampo ka na agad diyan. Na-missed din kita noh, wala kasing signal dun sa probinsya kaya hindi ako naka-connect sayo. ILY!

” I explained with kasamang paglalambing.

“Ganons? Ba’t kasi pa-probinsya-probinsya kapa eh meron naman London, Paris, at New York na nag-e-exist noh!” At umiral na naman po ang ka-sosyalan ng mahal kong bespren.

“Hay nako. Tsaka ka nalang mag-recommend kapag kaya mo na akong ilibre sa mga yon.”

“Mas mayaman ka kaya!”

“Ewan sayo, halika na nga ma-le-late na tayo

” I grabbed her hands and pulled her, baka kasi abutan pa kami ng awasan dun noh!

“Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiingg!”

And ther goes the bell. Teka, what’s happening? May dumating atang artista aah. Nagkakagulo sa tapat ng classroom namin. Mostly girls. Anong kayang meron?…Tumakbo agad si Eli at naki-usisa at pagka-balik na pagka-balik.

“Ches, be ready……” she said while gasping for air.

Why should I?? o_o

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#2 2008-10-21 18:58:08

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first to comment..
nice story^^..
im gonna watch for ur updates^^..

im gonna be ready..^^

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#3 2008-10-22 05:49:33

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gladz23 wrote:
first to comment..
nice story^^..
im gonna watch for ur updates^^..

im gonna be ready..^^

tensyu po!..

im glad khit isa may nakabasa na nito..hihih

im gonna update as soon as possible..
maybe later...

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#4 2008-10-22 05:52:01

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+._ROCEL_.+ wrote:
tensyu po!..

im glad khit isa may nakabasa na nito..hihih

im gonna update as soon as possible..
maybe later...

no prob sisz.. ganda nmn ur story ee..^^
cant w8 4 ur update^^

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#5 2008-10-22 08:35:34

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wow! nice story....

update na poh.........

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#6 2008-10-22 10:49:34

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new storii.
i'll wait for teh next update!

next naa!

i want ROBi DOMiNGO xD xD

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#7 2008-10-22 15:03:00

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wwwaaahhhh...
nice story...
update na p0h...

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#8 2008-10-22 15:15:23

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wweeww.. wla pdin updte..

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#9 2008-10-22 15:35:28

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whoa..
looks interesting..
ituloy muh sis..
i'll wait for d nx chap..

hmm..
boilet nnmn ung pngkkgulhan..
haha..

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#10 2008-10-22 18:59:26

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@ jovi_toni: tenks...hehe..hir the update..
@nicz.love:: tenks sis... eto na po!!..sorri kung late..
@aljelyn: wow...tenks...
@gladz: sorry sis...mejo malaki kasi tym difference natin ee..sorry..etu na pu update..
@megumi: tenks sa advise sis..etu na nga..itutuloy ko na po...hehe

CHAPTER II - Painful past....

Why should I?? o_o

Oh! BTW, kuwento ako ng kuwento `di pa nga pala ako nagpapakilala. Anyways, I'm Francheska Anne Olivarez, 15 years of young, currently studying as 3rd year high school. I live with my dad Eugenio Olivarez, although sometimes lang kaming magkasama kasi he's always on a business trip. I have 2 brothers but one of them is already happily married the other one is still in college, actually, it's his last year. We have our own companies kaya you can say that our status in life is high. Pero kahit ganon, I still prefer to have a family na laging magkakasama unlike this one. And then, back to the story.

"Whoa! Calm down Eli, repeat after me, breath in, breath out. Now tell me what's going on..Dumating ba si Zac Efron?? Jonas Brothers?? waaaa! Don't tell me merong gagawin na on the spot test?? Oh no! Hindi ako nakapag-aral!! OMG! This is the end of the world!!"

"Hey hey miss, relax, breath in, breath out." ha? ano `toh? Gayahin ba daw ung lines ko?

"Eh ano ba kasing meron ha? Why do i need to be ready?" I asked...calmly.

"Better see it for yourself" tsk..anu kaya un..

"Para ka namang ano eeh.. Tara na nga!"

And there...while walking, i can hear those screaming, yelling, shouting girls. My Gollie.. what's this??

"OH-MEY-GESH! Don't tell me para sa kanya lahat ng iyon?" I asked with a surprise look on my face.

"See, I warned you to be ready!" yeah right..

Grabeh..akala ko tapos na ang pasko hindi pa pala. Nung pagkadating namin sa classroom, actually pagkatapos naming makipag-siksikan dun. I was shocked when i saw all those boxes of gifts, they almost everywhere. But mostly, he received the biggest number of gifts. Well, sino pa ba edi si Henry Agustin, my classmate and my biggest mistake. Why? I'll tell you guys later.

"Morning Ches nandyan ka na pala" Henry greeted me, duh! As if naman batiin din kita! Okey, take it easy Ches, my time rin for your revenge. Just smile... yeah smile.

"Morning Henry, dami naman niyan. Namamayagpag kagawapuhan natin aah!" Pweeeh! Nasabi ko ba yun?? Disgusting!

"Kaw talaga...lagi kang nag-jo-joke about true things! Hehe!" Ano?? makapal pa din pala peys nito.. Hay.. hindi ba sya nagsulat ng New Years Resolution??

"Ganon?..Sige, maiwan na kita jan, matambakan pa ako ng mga walang taste mong admirers! Haha!" At ayun, tumawa na naman ang loko akala niya joke yun. Hahaha!

"Oye Ches, wala na ba talaga??" pang-gugulat na tanong ni Eli.

"Wala nang alin??" What's up with that question??..I don't get it.

"Ikaw, si Henry?"

"LOL!..Sira ka na ba ha Eli?..Wala na noh!..Bakit? You like him?" Pang-aasar ko.

Oh yeah...Like I said awhile ago..Between me and Henry, him being my biggest mistake. Well, nagsimula kasi yun ng grade 6 palang kame lagi kaming partner, sa project, sa competitions, basta kahit saan lagi kaming magkasama. Until one day, napag-isip-isip ko na parang I can't do anything alone without him. I soonly discovered na I fall for him na pala. At syempre bata pa, madulas ang dila, I told him about my feelings and he told me about his. I was happy that he feels the same way, Eli knows about it kasi we are bestfriends since kindergarten. But our relationship didn't last that long. May dumating na new girl sa school, Shayne Cruz. She's pretty, rich, and smart in short she's PERFECT. All of the guys fall for her, even him, Henry. Dumating yung day na halos hindi na niya ako akusapin, if ever man kakausapin niya lang ako about sa hobbies ni Shayne. Hindi ako nag-bother kasi mahal ko siya at alam kong friendly ang boypren ko. Pero one afternoon, pagkatapos ng cleaning duty ko sa classroom, I was looking for him kasi dapat magkasabay kaming uuwi. I looked for him everywhere, until I reached the playground behind our school, and there he was..sitting beside her, shayne..My tears started to fall down ng nakita kong hinawakan niya ang kamay ni Shayne and the kissed. I cried, for hours, days, weeks. Until i finally moved on and promised that someday I will have my sweet.....revenge.

back to story...

"LOL!..Sira ka na ba ha Eli?..Wala na noh!..Bakit? You like him?" Pang-aasar ko.

silence.......

"Magagalit ka ba?....kasi...kasi....Ches..mahal ko na ata siya eeh..."

"WHAT!!???? Are you kidding Eli?..`Coz it's not funny you know.." tanong ko..nagulat ako dun aah..don't tell me she's serious..hell no!

"Sorry Ches.." GOD! she is dead serious with what she's talking about. Oh man! Why??

"Nakalimutan mo na ba yung nangyari sa akin dati because of him?..Tignan mo nga..parang wala lang sa kanya yung nangyari samin..sakin.." I stopped.. tears are falling down her face...

"Sorry Ches...I'm really sorry..i just can't help it."

"Oh no Eli..Stop, don't cry..Okay, if you like him then go for it..as long as you're happy.." At pumasok na yung adviser namin...

May kasama...hmm..he looks sooo....yummy..ahihih

"Class we have a new classmate today...Okay kid..please take your seat beside that girl at the back."

WHAT???

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#11 2008-10-23 03:52:04

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haha..
papalicious bah..
haha..

i'll wait for the nx update..

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Nice story!
Update po!!

Ganda neto ahh.

^ ako yung naka cap. = ]

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#13 2008-10-23 05:41:51

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@megumi028: haha..sumtin lyk dat..haha
@gossipgirl03: naks..tenks sis..hih..im a superfan ng story mo..hih

I'll update later.. promise
thanks for supporting..

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#14 2008-10-23 07:05:52

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New reader. Ay. Nacurious na naman ako dun sa boy. Hahaha. Sino kaya yun?

- STORY.

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#15 2008-10-23 08:04:49

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ah.........

sino kaya yung bagong papa??
hehehehe.....

update na poh..

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#16 2008-10-23 09:45:15

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nice story, update please.

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#17 2008-10-23 15:32:59

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haha, alam mu ba eto ang first literature na nabasa ko?
Nyweis, i think this is nice. Pero ung medjo unang part di sya maganda. hehe sarcastic bigla.

Basta keep up the goodwork.

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nice chap....
update na p0h ulit...

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#19 2008-10-23 18:51:06

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EMae: tenks po...hehe..baka masagot na yung curiousity mo dito..
jovi_toni: di ko din alam sis ee..ahaha
kathleen24: thanks for reading my sotry..
jamessss:b: naks naman..i'm honored. hihi. fan mo aku ee kuya. Unfinished Prom. favorite kahit duwag ako. sorry po..di ko kasi alam kung panu ko bibigyan ng intro itoh, siguro kapag natapos ko na lahat ng chapter baka mabigyan ko ng magandang plot.
aljelyn13: thanks...

Chapter III - New guy, new plan, new.......Love?

WHAT???

Oh no! Anung gagawin ko??..He's coming...closer..closer...at ayun nakaupo na siya. OMG! Katabi ko siya! Oh-oh! Bakit?? Bakit??..Nakatingin ang buong class samin and hello there's only 10 boys in our class so siguro alam nyo na kung ano pa yung iba. Anu ba yan! I don't like this feeling. Ayoko ng pinagtitinginan ako. I hate it!

Okey... Don't mind them.. Inggit lang sila kasi hearthrob katabi mo!..
Isipin mo nalang you can use him... right..

"We have plan a special event for the students next week. " simula nang aming pinakamamahal na adviser.

At nagsigawan agad yung mga classmates ko. Well, kasi kapag may events it means all classes are suspended kaya kulang nalang dito sa mga classmates kong ito ay tumayo mismo dun sa desk.

"Please let me finish first bago kayo mag-celebrate guys. Good, now, we had a meeting about dun sa event and we decided it to call it A Special Student Week.

"Sir...Special Student Week???" tinanong ni Fafa Hearthrob. Nagtiliin naman yung mga girls. What's up with that?

"Yup,you heard it right, Student Week. Lahat ng Year & section mag-pe-prepare ng mga activities na pwede nilang ipakita sa last day ng Event. At as a teacher meron din kaming assignments to do. And I already told them kung anu gagawin natin in this room." yeah right...mag-siggest ba agad ng hindi kami tinatanong?

"Ah sir, pwede ba yun? Paano kung hindi namin kaya yung sinubmit mo na form?" I asked.

"Don't worry Ms. Olivarez. Ang gagawin natin dito sa class ay bukod pa dun sa gagawin nyu on the last day of the event. Anyway, I decided to make our precious classroom to be a wonderful science museum for just in one day. Siguro naman we can all do this if we just cooperate. So class, please?"

"YES SIRRRR!!!!!" we all scream!

"Thanks class, I'm really touch."

"Sir tama na drama. Di bagay, ahaha!" Pang aasar ni Dave, bestfriend ni Henry. Meron siyang lihim na pagtingin sa bespren kong si Eli, pero hindi naman siya pinapansin ni Eli.

"Ahahahahahahaha!

" sumunod sa pagtawa ang buong klase.

"For the Science Museum, we need to assign projects, by two's. You can choose kung sino gusto nyong maka-partner."

"Yes!

Bespreeeeeeee--"

"Oh Ches, I'm very sorry to disappoint you but do you mind if si Mr. Hernandez nalang ang partner mo?" what?..who the hell is that?.. wait.. could it be....?

"Oh Sir, thank you.

" Oh my gosh! Kumindat siya sakin!

Si Fafa Hearthrob!!

"No Sir, it's fine. I don't mind at all." I answered. Is this really happening??

"And class, i forgot to say but you have to be with your partner the whole week during the event. Is this clear?"

"Yes Sir!" sigaw nung mga classmates kong nasa mga ka-partner na nila.

"And kasama kayo dun Mr. Hernandez & Ms. Olivarez." What?? You're kidding right? Oh No!!! I'm gonna spend the whole week with him? Am I dreaming?? `Coz if I am.. ayoko ng magising!!

"Hi, Im Dennis Lester Hernandez. Nice meeting you miss..?"

"Oh..Sorry, I'm Francheska Anne Olivarez, Ches would be fine." Di ko na `toh carry!.. Water please!!!

"Cute name, Ches.. ano bang gusto mong gawin?" hayss..anything basta pwede kitang matitigan ng ganito..

"Ches...are you there?" Oooops...nahuli ata ako.

"Sorry, anu nga ulit yun?" grabeh...

"May crush ka na sakin noh? haha." what?? panu nya nalaman??? hinde. Come to think of it. May ka-preskohan din pala `tong lalaking `toh.

"Sorry for that. Hehe

Tinatanong ko sayo kung anong gusto mong gawin for the Science Museum para masabi ko na kay Sir." yeaaaa right baby...

"Solar System nalang kaya?.. What do you think?.. Madali lang kasing gawin yun. At least we can have more time for the last activity of the event."

Ano ba?.. Dapat pala yung mahiran nalang nirekomenda ko para mas matagal ko siyang ma-solo. You're really an idiot Ches.

Wag ka pumayag! Wag!

"Okey, no prob." ano? anu ba yan.

"So saan natin gagawin yung project. We can do it at my house." I suggested.

"Wait wait there baby. Ikaw na nag-decide kung anung gagawin natin. I think it's my turn to say kung saan tayo gagawa." baby???

Tinawag nya akong baby!!!

"Oh..Okey, I just thought that...So where do you feel to do it?" I asked him. My God! Grabeh. Gwapo talaga.

"In our house. hehe

" repeat..repeat!

"Excuse me??

" tinanong ko ulit. Baka kasi mali pag-kakarinig ko.

"At my house, why is there a problem?" aaah..hello!.. Kelangan pa bang itanong yan??

"Ahh...eehh... No, it's great." Pupunta ako sa house nya!

"So it's cleared.. I'll pick you up then, Saturday at 10am" pick me up???

"Wa...Wait! Paano mo ako susunduin eh hindi mo pa nga alam kung saan ako nakatira?" pagtataka ko.

"It's not a problem, I have sources. I'll pick you up okay babe?" he said it again! I'm melting!!!

"Babe?...." I asked.. Syempre pa-hard to get lola nyo.

"What? You're saying?" huh?.. kanina lang tinawag niya akong baby at babe.. my memory gap ata `toh aah.

"Nothing....Sorry.

" napahiya ako dun aah.

Wait, si Henry yun aah. So he's with Eli, that's great I'm happy for my bestfriend. Hmmm.. Bakit ganun nalang siyang makatingin sa amin ni Dennis Lester Hernandez? hmmmm. I smell something fishy..

Henry's POV:

Damn! He's already with her. Ang bilis naman nya. Kainis. I can't help it. Parang gusto ko agad sapakin ang lalaking yun aah! Ako dapat ang ka-partner ni Ches! Ako lang!

"Henry, are you okay?" Eli asked me.

"Ye--- Yeah!" tumingin din sya sa tinitingnan ko. Nalungkot siya. Bakit kaya?

"Can we start?" She asked...I can't do anything.

"Su--sure...

"

Ches POV:

Hmmm.. is it possible na nagseselos siya?? hmmmm. It gives me an idea. Pero paano na si Eli? I can't hurt my own bestfriend. Pero siguro naman maiintindihan niya na ito na ang matagal ko ng hinihintay. Magbabayad ka rin Henry.

"Dennis Lester Hernandez, can we talk about the expenses later after lunch?" tanong ko para naman maihanda ko na.

"Haha! Ano ka ba Ches, Lester nalang di ko feel yung buong name eeh." ang cool nga eeh. ano kaya hindi nya feel dun?

"Okay Lester

, can we?" i asked again.

"Why after lunch pa? We can eat together naman di ba?

" whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?? Oh lord.. anong nagawa ko at pinagpapala mo ako ng ganito...

"I want to know more about you anyway... You have all the things I want in a girl"

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Re: ★ Once Upon A Shooting Star- Chapter 20 - Part 2 [THE END] ★

wow.. bilis nmn ni lester.. whaha..

+._ROCEL_.+ wrote:
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